Thumbnails on a two page sequence from the second issue of The Carnival: One Last Note Before I Go. I had changed this from a single page where i thought that the story had become too compressed. I was worried that I needed to keep pressing more information into the reader, and i realized that there needed to be a little... more space. Because my dialogue is so brilliant that it needed more pages. I love the way the action sets up, now we'll see how it looks full size...
